Through a dream catcher,
I see Mum's shrinking world view;
We admire her trees.
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Artist's view of life, Detail from my world each day, Small mundane moments.
About Me
- Sarah Pletts
- Under scrutiny, Documenting the mundane, Learning how to live. Noticing detail, Of ordinary moments, Awareness expands. A 'haiku' poem, Has seventeen syllables: Five, seven and five.
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1 comment:
Great first two lines, let down by the last. Need something that unifies lovely image of dreams (expansive) and your mum's world view (retracting). But image great.
Do you mind me being so critical? (why am I asking Judge Mental this?) - really love reading your work and it's a daily pleasure for me, but of course once the familiarity of that pleasure wears off a little I want to be part of that conversation. But speaking as someone who creates myself, I know when it can be a) helpful and b) not. Big love on ya Nx
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