Beautiful beautiful picture. Haiku weaker - last line should pick up the idea of the greasy rainbow and go deeper into the colours...imo. But the picture - wow!
Under scrutiny,
Documenting the mundane,
Learning how to live.
Noticing detail,
Of ordinary moments,
Awareness expands.
A 'haiku' poem,
Has seventeen syllables:
Five, seven and five.
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Beautiful beautiful picture.
Haiku weaker - last line should pick up the idea of the greasy rainbow and go deeper into the colours...imo.
But the picture - wow!
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