Taylor bows and smiles,
In slow formal dance, arms raised,
We fold miles of sheet.
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- Sarah Pletts
- Under scrutiny, Documenting the mundane, Learning how to live. Noticing detail, Of ordinary moments, Awareness expands. A 'haiku' poem, Has seventeen syllables: Five, seven and five.
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1 comment:
Hey sweetie
Photo lovely and Haiku great but can I flag up the virtues of repetition.... eg you write 'We fold miles of sheet' - how about 'Miles and miles of sheet'? Repetition is core device used in popular song - and can be very effective even in this short format. Nx
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